Onslaught

it's already bringing some vibes, it's so good, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work.

The story begins in a captivating way, drawing the reader in with an intriguing atmosphere full of promise. From the very first pages, it's impossible not to feel drawn to the protagonist's potential for growth, as their journey unfolds with challenges and discoveries. The narrative builds a great sense of anticipation around their development, suggesting that every choice and obstacle will be crucial in shaping their destiny. With such a promising start, curiosity only grows, leaving the reader eager to follow every step of this exciting journey.

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"Sucker Father, I go."

"Your welcome desu."

[Location: 2 days travel north]

Murrue sat in silence, mind wandering from one thought to the next. Strategically, we probably would only get in the way. She looked forward at the amassed ships. I'm sure Kira got his discharge papers. So we're short one pilot, leaving only Mu and Zero. His machine may be strong but even Zero couldn't be that much of a game changer. Not to mention the Archangel itself wasn't fully prepared for enemy engagement of that number. And the civilians who acted as part of the crew were gone too, leaving them effectively with less than a skeleton crew. Her fist slammed on the arm rest to her left. "Damn it."

"Yeah, it would make sense. Maybe he could 'present' them to someone for an alliance or even marry them to reinforce his position if he wants to take the throne."